vinniebatman

Nice. I think it worked well. It's absolutely clear who's who, and remains so throughout. My main problem with all-dialogue scenes is that sometimes when authors lose the "voices" a bit part way through a scene like this, I find myself having to count lines back up going "okay, that's Spike... Xander... Spike... ok, so Xander's the one talking about the cat", that kind of thing. Nothing like that here. Very well done. :)