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Title:  BEST.DAY.EVER.
Author: vinniebatman aka batmanvinnie
Fandom: SGA
Pairings/Characters: McShep
Rating/Warnings:  Adult
Summary:  [info]wolfshark  wanted some happy!comment!porn for her rainy day.  I started a comment, but  like much of my writing, it just kept growing and growing.  So instead I present happy!goodfuture!drabble!series!porn!  It's a story with porn told in five true 100-word drabbles.  NOT BETA'D, just a bit of crazy porn n' fluff.






Disclaimer: I conquered the world AND the Pegasus Galaxy.  I now own all. Thank you.   Or not.

 



John, Ronon and Teyla sit in the mess hall, eating lunch on a day the same as countless others.  Rodney had rushed off earlier, mumbling about a project in his lab.  Suddenly, a running, yelling, excited Marine breaks the calm, his rushed words sending everyone in the mess into a flurry of discussion.  Some are angry, some overjoyed while John feels a knot of fear disappear, hope blossoming.

John runs from the room, ignorant of Ronon and Teyla's knowing smirks.

The Marine's words echo in his mind:

"President Obama signed the non-discrimination bill; don't ask, don't tell has been overturned."

* * * * * * * * * *
Rodney doesn't understand it, growing angrier as soldiers show up and steal his scientists.  When John runs in moments later, Rodney suppresses the urge to stare, forcing an irritated attitude.  Then John utters seven words and before Rodney can even process them, he's pulled into a searing kiss filled with desire.

John licks against the seam of Rodney's mouth, pleading wordlessly.  Rodney opens his mouth, moaning as their tongues writhe against each other.  John wedges a leg between Rodney's and soon they're both grinding against one another, panting.

Radek clears his throat, grinning when Rodney drags John away.

* * * * * * * * * *

John pins Rodney against the wall of his quarters.  Fingers tremble as they remove their clothing, overwhelming lust sending tremors through them both.  Soon they're naked, Rodney pressing into John's chest.  The hair that brushes against his skin sends burning shivers down Rodney's spine.  But it's not enough.

There's so much they want to do to each other, but they've waited so long.  Too much desperation to let them taste and touch like they've dreamed of.

Pushing Rodney onto the bed, John looks down at him with burning eyes, his hard, leaking cock jutting out.

"Fuck me, Rodney."

* * * * * * * * * *

Rodney marvels at John's beauty as he buries three fingers inside him.  John lays beneath him, writhing and begging, arms hooked behind his knees.  Rodney stares at the stretched hole, watching as his fingers pump in and out.

Leaning down, Rodney bites John's nipples, his sobs make Rodney's cock even harder.  By the time Rodney's fingers have been removed and his cock lubed, precome is dripping down John's dick.  Leaning down, Rodney sneaks a taste, and it shatters his control.  Seconds later, he's buried balls deep inside John, John's fingers scratching red trails down Rodney's arms.

* * * * * * * * * *

It's perfect.  Being inside of John is the best thing Rodney's ever felt.  The tight grip is wonderful, but watching John thrash and beg, pupils blow wide, is the best part.

Sinful words drip from John's lips, and Rodney bends John in half so he can swallow them.  John reaches up, twisting Rodney's nipples, and it's all Rodney can do to not come.  Reaching down, he tugs on John's cock.  John comes, screaming Rodney's name.  Rodney follows quickly.  Later, they lay tangled on the small bed, enjoying the afterglow of the best day ever.

Date: 2008-02-22 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wellowned.livejournal.com
obama for president!!!!!

woo! very nice. :D

Date: 2008-02-22 11:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vinniebatman.livejournal.com
Thanks, I think it would be great too!

~Alice~

Date: 2008-02-22 11:16 pm (UTC)
wolfshark: (Default)
From: [personal profile] wolfshark
Yay for comment porn that gets bigger!

Date: 2008-02-22 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vinniebatman.livejournal.com
Yes, it was the porn that would not die, written between assignments at work.

~Alice~

Date: 2008-02-23 12:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sulien77.livejournal.com
*stands up and cheers* Yay! May it soon come true.

Thank you for this story, it not only made me cheer, it made me smile and curl my toes as well. Sweet!

Date: 2008-02-23 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vinniebatman.livejournal.com
I'm glad it caused several reactions to you.

I was hoping to hit all those buttons, and it appears that I did.

~Alice~

Date: 2008-02-23 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Yay best day ever!
ETA: I LOVE that the military keeps taking away Rodney's scientists. lol
Edited Date: 2008-02-23 02:52 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-02-24 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vinniebatman.livejournal.com
I figured most of the closeted military members would have the same idea as John: grab your nerd and run to the nearest flat surface!

Thanks a million for the feedback.

~Alice~

Date: 2008-02-23 05:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xela-fic.livejournal.com
Best. Campaign Pitch. EVER.

Date: 2008-02-24 12:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vinniebatman.livejournal.com
Well, I didn't mean for it to be a campaign pitch, but I'm glad you enjoyed it all the same.

Thanks for the FB.

~Alice~

Date: 2008-02-23 06:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] love-jackianto.livejournal.com
'Later, they lay tangled on the small bed, enjoying the afterglow of the best day ever.'... awwe.

Date: 2008-02-24 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vinniebatman.livejournal.com
Thanks, I wanted something a bit aww-worthy.

I appreciate the feedback.

~Alice~

Date: 2008-02-23 07:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ezazahaz.livejournal.com
The "President Obama" part made me smile even before I read the rest of the fic (which was also great, of course). :)

Date: 2008-02-24 12:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vinniebatman.livejournal.com
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thought it would be nice to write a McShep where they hand a chance at a future that didn't involve John getting kicked out of the military.

Thanks so much for the feedback.

~Alice~

Date: 2008-02-25 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catvampcrazines.livejournal.com
Hee! Lovely. *G*

Date: 2008-02-25 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vinniebatman.livejournal.com
Thanks!
Just some random future!crack with a smattering of porn.
Thanks so much for the FB!

~Alice~

Date: 2009-08-05 06:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scoob2222.livejournal.com
This is so awesome!

Date: 2009-08-05 04:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vinniebatman.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it.!

~Alice~

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